NAME: ADELIA TAUFINATA
SRN : 12340010
How to write paragraph with adequate and
inadequate cohesion.
Adequate and inadequate cohesion is a categories to make a good paraghraph ,in
the last posted i have explain about adequate and inadequate coherence ,now i
will write more about adequate and inadequate cohesion in paragraph ,a good
paragraph is a paragraph that included of the paragraph to be present, you
should pay attention in the content of the paragraph, how to write paragraph
with good cohesion ? the first you should know the main ideas of the paragraph
,than you should pay attention on :
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We have
to know about repetation of the same elements
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We have
to use the pronoun
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And we
have to use conjunction .
What is the meaning of cohesion ? if we talk about cohesion and how important
cohesion in our writing ? i will say that cohesion is really important. Because
why? If you write paragraph with cohesion you will write about something that
still connect each other for exampe: how
are you ? are you in a good condition right ? you still live in metro ?.so
cohesion is the responsibility of the writer in english to make the reader
clear how various parts of the paragraph are connected. Because every text has
a structure. It is not just a random collection of sentences. The parts that
make these relationship in this text ,make a meaningfull each otherand show how
the sentences are related. So what is the real meaning of cohesion ? cohesion
is the grammatical and lexical linking within a text or sentence that holds a
text together and gives meaning. There are two main types of cohesion :
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Grammatical cohesion
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Lexical cohesion
In my previous posted i have explain about coherence and in this case iam
going to explain about the difference between cohesion and coherence
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Cohesion is a
writing that still connect each other and coherence in literally means that
“sticking together “ when we applied in our writing it refers to how well the
writing how well it flow from the idea to the text and in coherence you will find the verb,subject each sentences will be
same for example paragraph coherence : for
me the worst thing about waiting tables is the uniform. All the waitresses had
to wear this ugly brown striped jumper.
The other difference between cohesion and
coherence is if you write your paragraph with coherence so the reader will know thar you
have a consistent in your writing. Consistantly and continously through your
writing you can connect each paragraph some how,that you can consistantly write
consistantly as well. You can express yourself clearly. If you will write
paragraph with cohesion you need some steeps that you must do for make your
paragraph be a good paragraph. There are
2 strategies :
1 .Macro level strategies :cohesion in
writing is achieved in many ways. It is created at the overall text and
paragraph level by :
- the structure and content of your
introductions and conclutions.
- the overall structure of your text – how
the parts fit together .
- the structure of your individual argument .
- The way you structure your paragaph .
2. Micro level strategies
- theme and thematic progression
- vocabulary choices
- reference
So the difference between cohesion and
coherence is : content of the sentence still connect each other we call it cohesion. If the subject , sentence
,verb each sentence same that include of coherence.
IDENTIFYING
OR ANALYZYNG WITH ADEQUATE AND INADEQUATE COHESION
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ME MY SELF
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INTRODUCTORY
PARAGRAPH
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Hay , in this spesial moment i will describing about myself
, why i want to describe about myself ? because i want to be famous people
,and i want all of people know about me hehe, in this case i will write about my phisicaly my
hobby,my character and soon. So let’s read carefully
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BODY PARAGRAPH
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My name is ADELIA
TAUFINATA so that you can call me adel,dela ,ade, yeah
whatever you want to call me ,but please don’t call me ‘TAU’ .I was born on may
1994, Now i’m 19 years old,
now I study in Muhammadiyah University of
Metro. I’m in the 4th semester. I take
english department. I have big enough body
, i look like ‘Adele’ hehe.... i have heigh about 158 cm and about my weight
pleasee don’t ask me about that because i never counting. I have yellow
creamy skin, i have long straight hair , usuall nose, chink eyes, thick
eyebrow, thin lips and oval face. I live in Sumberrejo,
Batanghari ,East Lampung. I live there with my family ,my parents and also my brother and
my sister. I’m the first child in my family, so i like a queen in my home who
always sneaky on my brother and sister,but actually i care about them ,i’m is
a good old sister and i love them like Mr.Crab loves his money. I’m a
dilligent daughter i always wake up early morning to help my mother. I’am a
fussy person but i’m a beautiful girl, easy going, and friendly ( i think ). . I like to read a new book, book
with full colour , i dislike if the book just white and black that make me
bored, for me book is a medicine to sleep faster. Watching movie is one of my
interest hoby , whatever the kind of movie i like ,because movie can incrase
my ability in speaking english ,i can see how their pronounciation, and about
their expression. I spend my free time in holiday most of my free time to do
my assigment ,why ? because i go to campus every day so there are a lot of
home work that i must do in my free time.
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CONCLUDING PARAGRAPH
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Okey , that’s all about myself , iam a big beautiful girl who
always smile althought so many people always jugde me because of my body , but
i don’t care about that. I always try to study hard ,pray to God ,be a good
daughter and letter i will make my parents proud of me .
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Paragraph
or sentences which categorized into cohesion and why ?
The first is brown colour with
underline sentence ,include of cohesion because the
sentence relevan each other
second is yellow colour with underline ,why that sentences include of cohesion ? becouse
there I use the conjunction to connect each sentences like “but,but also and
soon”. Third is black underline sentence because there i use the
pronouns like “that”. Than purple with underline sentence is indicate of cohesion because I use
relationship timeline marker. Than green
with underline sentence why
that include into cohesion because there I give detail information about
location
That all about my reason why my sentence with
diferent and underline are incloude into cohesion , if there are some mistakes
i’m sorry because I still study ,and please give comment on my blog , thank you
J .
