NAME : ADELIA TAUFINATA
SRN :12340010
NARRATIVE TEXT
Hey guys , in
this week I will tell you about my unforgotable moment ,or my great experience in this story there
are happy section, sad, and complication
with happy ending. This moment also make me know who people care with me and
who people didn’t care with me , from this I learn also about what is
friendship?. This happened one year ago, when I was in nineteen years old, so
let’s read carefully guys ....
MY
NINETEEN BIRTHDAY SURPRISE
One year ago, in
the Sunday morning like a usually, because I’am a dilligent and beautiful
daughter,so I always helped my mother to
tiddy up the house , i started to wash the plate,wash the clothes,and many
other. At the time my felling is not good enough, i felt sad, gloomy , and i
think that no one care about me. In my deep heart i said “ today is my birth
day why no one said happy birth day for me ,there is no cake, there is no
canddle.” I was really sad at the time , all of the day i just stayed in my bed
room until night,and always looked at the clock.
Monday morning
,I went to the campus at 08.00 o’clock,i met
all of my friend and i still think , why they didn’t remembered about me
? I still felt sad in the campus, then when lesson is finish one of my friend
said with me “ del common went to agatha’s house because we must do some group
work “ I just silent and followed them. On the way i started fell strange with
my friend , they always bullyed at me, and stayed away from me. Suddenly, i
fell down from my motorcycle and they didn’t looked at me, and i felt that i
wanna cry. In agatha’s house they more strange than in the campus they often
leaved me alone, and that maked me confused. Suddenly dinyok called me and ask
me to go out side from agatha’s house but before that they asked me to change
my clothes and i didn’t want but they still asked me to change. In the out side
suddenly from my back they tied me under the tree,and leave me alone there. I
shouted call them but they didn’t come , and unpredictable, suddenly they came
with a big pail of dirty water,flavour ,and some eggs. I was really shocked and
i say with them please don’t do that !
but they didn’t heard at me... and taraaaaaaaa! They watered me ,throwed me
with the egg,and give me the flovour.
I felt happy,and angry, than they leaved me
alone again, but suddenly they come and bring a beautiful white cake with many
fruits on the cake and canddles, with 19 number,,,, aaaaaaaaaak I really
surprise to got that cake ,and unpredictable surprise.after that i took a
bath,change my clothes , eat the cake together and went to my home .
I got my beautiful cake ...
thanks for everything
Well guys thats
all about my story , the moral message from my story is , the important thing
of the friendship, and how the way to treat people who treat you with good
things. Why i chosee this story , actually there are so many great experience
in my life but for me this is the most greatful exprerience that I ever had is
.. I HAVE BEAUTIFUL ,KIND AND LOVEABLE FRIEND like you all ( dinyok,
agatha,titah, indah . thank’s that being rainow in my life
Identifying part
of content of the narrative paragraph :
Title : My
nineteen birthday surprise
Theme: The best
and great moment
Plot : foward
Climax : when
they tied me under the tree
Setting :
setting of place - writer’s house, campus, agatha’s house.
Setting of time – in the morning
one year ago.
Language feature
:
-Using past
tense
-Using action
verb
-Using specific
part
-Using conjunction
Identifying paragraph
based of the generic structure
TITLE
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MY NINETEEN BIRTHDAY
SURPRISE
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ORIENTATION
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One year ago, in the Sunday
morning like a usually, because I’am a dilligent and beautiful
daughter,so I always helped my mother
to tiddy up the house , i started to wash the plate,wash the clothes,and many
other. At the time my felling is not good enough, i felt sad, gloomy , and i
think that no one care about me.
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COMPLICATION
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I went to the campus at 08.00
o’clock,i met all of my friend and i
still think , why they didn’t remembered about me ? I still felt sad in the
campus, then when lesson is finish one of my friend said with me “ del common
went to agatha’s house because we must do some group work “ I just silent and
followed them. On the way i started fell strange with my friend , they always
bullyed at me, and stayed away from me. Suddenly, i fell down from my
motorcycle and they didn’t looked at me, and i felt that i wanna cry. In
agatha’s house they more strange than in the campus they often leaved me
alone, and that maked me confused. Suddenly dinyok called me and ask me to go
out side from agatha’s house but before that they asked me to change my
clothes and i didn’t want but they still asked me to change. In the out side
suddenly from my back they tied me under the tree,and leave me alone there. I
shouted call them but they didn’t come , and unpredictable, suddenly they
came with a big pail of dirty water,flavour ,and some eggs
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RESOLUTION
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I was really shocked and i say
with them please don’t do that ! but
they didn’t heard at me... and taraaaaaaaa! They watered me ,throwed me with
the egg,and give me the flovour. I felt happy,and angry, than they leaved me
alone again, but suddenly they come and bring a beautiful white cake with
many fruits on the cake and canddles, with 19 number,,,, aaaaaaaaaak I really
surprise to got that cake ,and unpredictable surprise.after that i took a
bath,change my clothes , eat the cake together and went to my home .
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